Score: 8

"Surprised"

submission: Dirty Obsession

date: December 5, 2009

Nice surprise (and connection) with the joystick, and yes, a good wtf ending. To anyone else commenting on the Dutch-language commentator, you might note that .nl is a Netherlands domain name extension.

Score: 7

"Good match"

submission: Report: Lord Of The Flies

date: December 5, 2009

I think your somewhat grotesque aesthetic corresponds accurately to the disturbing elements in the novel. However, you did forget to mention the stick sharpened on both ends that is used (we are led to infer) to anally penetrate the twins, as when the owner of said stick spears the pig: "right up her ass!"

Score: 10

"Inventive"

submission: Microcosm

date: December 1, 2009

This was a great flash--it's good to see something that directly engages the medium, and the fourth wall pun was an instant classic. Thank you for reminding me of the title of that awesome video game! I used to play it over and over again--did you know you can make him fart by repeatedly pressing the down button? 5/5

Score: 8

"Sustainable"

submission: Liquid_Nitrogen

date: November 10, 2009

This track loops beautifully with great satisfaction--it is sustainably pleasant for long periods of time. The only thing it lacks is surprise. Thank you.

Score: 8

"Balanced"

submission: [gabber] Violent Stories

date: November 10, 2009

It has almost everything you could have in an industrial track: the grind of machines, compelling rhythm, catchy melody. The only thing it really lacks is surprise. Thank you. 4/5

Score: 7

"Melody needs work"

submission: [loud] Involuntary

date: November 10, 2009

I love industrial and this is a great track--thank you. The melody, however, all the way up to about 1:12 when it stops, is simplistic, repetitive, and too clean both in its progression and the actual sound. After that, I can really hear the machines of industry grinding away and the track picks up, although it would be nice to add onto it after this, perhaps a more rhythmic section with bass, etc.